Thane

Now, now. There won't be any suicidal building jumping happening.
Here goes: His body and outfit is spot on, and I especially love the biotic effect you've got going there *cough*nottomentionhischest*cough*. You've done well on his face as well, but you might have over-exaggerated some features. His neck isn't that long, and his face is just a little too narrow. Those are little mistakes that you can come away with pretty easily, but they're made more clear by his forehead: it's a little too 'high', if you get what I mean. The structure of his face is quite similar to a humans, it it just looks very different on the outside. So, if you ever feel like fixing it: make his scalp/forehead a little rounder/lower, and add those three sexy ridges.

Yes, yes, I know it was just a speedpaint, and that if you ever draw him again I will marry you and have your children you'll get him spot on. But hey! I like giving advice.